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The difference between China and India
____By watching Slumdog Millionaire
I think China and India are at different levels.There are lots of differences between them.
First,the standard of living in our country is higher than that in India. In any Chinese cities, no slum exists, also no so many begger problems.In China,food and clothing, minimum housing are no longer problems for anybody, but India still has those problems. Air-conditioner, computer, motorcycle, cell phones..., these items any Chinese can afford to buy, Car is no longer a luxury any more, most of people are able to buy it.And cell-phone is very popular with all the teenagers.But for many Indians, those are still dreams.
Second,I want to say something about India’s education.I suppose it is very important for children to have a good environment to study and live.But in fact,India provides children with a dirty environment. India’s education is called ‘rote learning’,few schools pay attention t

In any Chinese cities, no slum exists, also no so many begger problems.是否太绝对了些呢？而且语法拼写都有错。
参考：in most chinese cities, there are no as many slums and beggar problms as that of india.

In China,food and clothing, minimum housing are no longer problems for anybody, but India still has those problems. 好绝对。
参考：food,clothing and mimimum housing are no longer big problems for most chinese,but not for the majority of indians.

Air-conditioner, computer, motorcycle, cell phones..., these items any Chinese can afford to buy绝对了。语法错误。
参考：air-conditioners,computers,motorcycles,cell phones...nearly any of chinese can afford these items ,at least one of them.

Car is no longer a luxury any more, most of people are able to buy it.
参考：cars are no longer luxurious purchases, for more and more chinese are able to buy one or more.

And cell-phone is very popular with all the teenagers.
参考：and cell phones are popular among all ages of ch